Offerings of a beautiful Monday to all who reside on the Western hemisphere. And for my acquaintances on the Eastern half, I hope your slumber is undisturbed.
Yes, I know the title has nothing to do with nothing, but just felt like quoting some ole school Black Sheep.
Okay, so regularly my mother and I read the ‘Daily Bread, Word and other spiritual literature in order to keep us guided through rough waters and for continued strength. It’s not unusual to find inspirational sayings, quotes and so on and so forth contained within.
Well yesterday, the Daily Bread had a sentence within it that read something like this: “When you forget yourself, you usually start doing something others will remember.”
How awesome is that?
So now I know what needs to happen. A new brand of T-Shirt needs to flood the fashion circuits. Just an idea below, but I’m thinking something along these lines. A rough sketch created without a drawing tablet or sleep or my usual morning coffee, so be gentle.
Okay, so if you are a follower on my Facebook page https://www.facebook.com/dede.before then you probably saw my tribute to Carl Sanderson for his opinions which became my inspiration. Patrick Leslie also gave me some key ingredients that made this Audi RS7 dish more delectable.
So here it is. The two audio files run at different marks within the script. Play them, get a feel for them and then read the script. Visualize the opening scene with the audio playing softly. It’s quite an experience.
1. (We use this track for about 78% of the script)
2. (This track takes us home.)
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Note: Be sure and open up two different windows in order to listen to the audio while reading the script.
Music by ‘The Verve”
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For those of you who read part one of the latest screenplay I scripted called ‘SLIM’, prepare for a potential part 2. While in the shower, I had an epiphany to draw out SLIM further, into a sequel, most likely as a short film. I am thinking approximately 20 or 30 minutes, but that can all change.
One thing that is certain, the twist will have you screaming expletives.
As with all literary endeavors; concepts and ideas perpetually change. Not to mention overlooked grammatical errors were found:(
Below is the updated Audi Script.
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We changed the car to the one you see above. More intense color and experience, because after all, our driver is a working class man escaping reality via an extraordinary automobile. Still considering changing the music, but have yet to figure out the alternative.
Most likely, you are aware of the truly awesome commercials that the writers for Audi are able to create. My favorite is the (2013) advertisement about the young man going to prom alone, but in his fathers Audi.
With that said, here’s a short commercial I scripted. It’s a work in progress, but let me know what you think. Would love to hear your opinions. AUDI_6-4-2014
As with all my uploaded work, the ideas and concepts are copyright protected;)
SLIM: the story of a Ugandan family struggling to survive in the midst of the ‘SLIM’ epidemic, while a young American man seeks reconciliation with his past, has been updated.
A pdf link is provided down below for your viewing pleasure. VIEW SCRIPT UPON REQUEST
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